I'm no poet, but that sounds really good to me. If your son didn't like it, you should be happy that he is striving for the stars. I'm surprised that a kid with that level of determination has only killed 2 deer. Then again, back in the late 80's it took me forever to kill deer even though I was super determined at 19 and just starting to deer hunt.
Shake your son's hand for me and tell him he did a great job.
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The pond, waterfowl, and yellow labs...it don't get any better.
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